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A Good Start

The art had a lot of emphasis put into it, but the animation (movement) lacked.
I enjoy walking dead stories, and other than a chemical spill or radioactive explosive, they don't need much more than that for the story. However, there was much to be desired for this because it had a feature-length plot and ended so abruptly. I wanted to see zombies eating flesh & brains and getting blown up and shot.
Still, it was entertaining for its length and had effort put into it.
One last thing - stay away from shape tweening (like when the monkey turns into a monster) until you know how to use it properly, otherwise it looks really bad.

-T0MMY

It Was Pretty Decent

The song got annoying, but I gave you a high score in the Sound area because I'm assuming you made that song yourself. If it wasn't yours than I'd give you a really low score for that.
Although the movie was involving, it seemed like the whole story made little sense, had no plot, or development. But I enjoyed the intro which familiarized us with Wonderlick and the other characters.
Work on developing plot and theme, you have a good story going without dialogue.

-T0MMY

You are my 50th review, congratulations

You just can't go wrong evoking emotion by showing some guy beating his wife and kid. It's been done a million times, but you've given it to the Newgrounds community, and have done it well.
The artistic style was very american, but the stills you put in gave it a nice touch as if we were frozen in time while there was a flashback or during violent scenes so as to let the emotional content soak in.
Some of the animation needed easing or "stretch & squash" (like the football), but other than that I think it was very good.
One other thing, there was a misspelling in the newspaper.
Oh, and nobody uses a fork to eat their food like that; the angle you had it at was very unsettling, it needs to be a side angle.

-T0MMY

Thanks

Thanks for making some great Flash content for us. I appreciate your hard work to bring everyone enjoyable entertainment.
Sorry if my last review of one of your animations was so harsh, but you seemed to take the criticism very well, unlike everyone else I've written reviews for. I admire that.
Although some of the animation was lacking either through time constraints, ability, or effort, I was impressed by the level of art and animation this provided.
What I enjoy most about Miracle Explosion is the unique story. Very adventureous and fantastic. Oh, and that Tummie Theme of course :)

-T()MMY

Keep Trying

Although it's obvious you have no idea how to create a complete story nor draw much better than a gorilla, this was none-the-less a very good attempt for your level of experience.
Some suggestions: Stay away from tired jokes that have been overused mercilessly. The whole "I'm your father." gag has been done and redone since the Star Wars movies came out decades ago.
The ONLY original drawings I remember was the blood, and I have to disagree with the other reviewers, I liked the style of the blood (pretty silly). Though I found myself wondering if Kirby actually had blood... stay away from using blood, try going with puffs of clouds and stars like in the game. That doesn't mean stay away from action, Kirby is full of action and drama (in a lampooning way).
All in all, if you enjoy creating animated stories you should stay with it as you will get much better. You've got more talent than a lot of others trying their hand at video game parodies.

-T()MMY

seikendensetsurules responds:

1. It's a friggin sprite cartoon, it's not SUPPOSED to have drawings in it, at least not many.
2. You can't really say I have the drawing talent of a gorilla after viewing about 2 drawings that aren't even supposed to look good.
3. What do you mean 'create a complete story'? It's a fight cartoon, there's not SUPPOSED to be a story.
4. Finally, I know some of the jokes were old - however, you should have noticed that I was actually subtly poking fun at how much they had been overused.

I think you need to rethink what the phrase 'Sprite Movie' actually means, then you can review sprite movies.

I <3 Egg

Although I think eggs are one of the most disgusting foods (if you can call chicken embryos food), I love this series.
You protray gravity so well, and your understanding and execution of stretch & squash is superb. Combine these techniques with your storytelling and cinematography talents and you've got a perfect animation.
This is one of the only decent series on Newgrounds, and one I want to see continue. You have my support all the way.

-T()MMY

Agonizing

The traced images were barely animated.
I'm so sick of video game characters doing drugs, it wasn't funny the first time, and it won't be the next million times.
Learn the basics of visual arts, creative writing, and the software before you submit to Newgrounds.

-T()MMY

WeedDoggy responds:

Im sorry how old are 22, 23? Well I really think you need a life im making fun of kirby cuz hes so stupid and I didnt trace tose idiot!

Well Done

Although completely lacking in story, this would be a wonderful animated intro to a "Rockman Neo" series played before the actual animation.
I love frame by frame and the style you gave the characters is better than their actual look from the games.
I didn't like your "Dr. Wily Show," but did enjoy this. Keep bringing good animations to Newgrounds.

-T()MMY

Blah

Just goes to show if you rip off 8-bit theatre you'll get top scores.
This animation imitated the comics well... as in innocuous and and bland.

-T()MMY

Eh...

The magic mushroom thing has been done to death, and it wasn't even that funny the first time. Not a lot of effort, and it shows in the end result.

-T()MMY

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