Eh...
The magic mushroom thing has been done to death, and it wasn't even that funny the first time. Not a lot of effort, and it shows in the end result.
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Eh...
The magic mushroom thing has been done to death, and it wasn't even that funny the first time. Not a lot of effort, and it shows in the end result.
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No Substance
This looks like something you wanted to get out of your head and onto Flash. It had no substance and really shouldn't have been submitted. The shape tweening looked like an attempt at "drawing under the camera" but I couldn't tell because it didn't turn out that way.
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I agree with you that I just wanted to get this out of my head, but I don't see why it shouldn't have been summited. Don't blame me, blame the many people who wanted to see it on NG.
Is It Animated?
I enjoy dark humor, but the total lack of animation was a contributing factor that ruined this.
One of the few movies with dark humor that didn't even make me smile.
As much as I enjoy a roasted child, I'd still take a tofurky over a dead bird anyday.
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Understood. I threw this together in a few hours as a way to say "Happy Thanksgiving." It's not an opus by any stretch.
I love it!
I was most impressed by the music and style. It's very rare to see anyone actually make their own music on Newgrounds. And, although the artwork was terrible, it had a great style to it. All in all, a sick & disturbing movie which is just great.
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Beautiful
It's so nice to see something this well done that isn't stolen.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Improvements
I guess the most important thing would be to spell correctly and keep the words up on screen long enough for the viewer to actually read them.
Then study long and hard all things art. After that, create a dozen more animations and submit the best of those.
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thanks for your nice revieuw :)
the problem is my first langauge isn't english plus i'm having language problems
so i can't really help the spelling...
well not seeing that my sister has left the dictonary at school....
thanks again!
I found myself wondering why I was sitting through old jokes for what felt like such a long time. My only reasoning for why you're exploiting Kirby is because he's easier to draw/animate because it's clear nobody who worked on this ever had any formal training in art.
The voice acting was sad. The voice actor sucked the life out of Kirby.
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Agh...
Kirby was in it for... how many seconds?
Do us all a favor and make John & Richie the cartoon instead. I'd give that a better score.
Graphics: Bad, Kirby looks like he has wings sometimes. Some of the other art was better, but the animation was choppy and off sync.
Sound: Hurt my ears, try not to clip the audio so much. Sync, sync, sync.
Interactivity: I pretty much just wanted to skip through to the preview, the extra stuff was not worth the extra time downloading. But at least it was there.
Style: I hate the way Kirby looks (when he was actually shown), everything else was kind of... eh.
Violence: Red paintbrush tool thrown upon the stage randomly is what I call the epitomy of immature violence. Still, it netted you a score of 1.
Humor: Uh... don't need to say anything here.
Hope my suggestions helped.
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Kir byKirbyKirby right here, folks:
http://www.newgrounds.com/po rtal/view.php?id=62300
Well... If you REALLY think that it sucks... then by all means, express your opinion.
I Didn't Like It At All
Please, kill this series.
I found the story to be dull and drawn out almost to the point of nausea.
Suggestions:
1) Originality. Needs more. A lot more.
2) Trim this bloat. I could barely sit through it and regret doing so.
3) Find voice actors and maybe invest in some kind of microphone that doesn't come bundled with your PC.
I'm sorry to give this such a low score seeing that I know how much time you put into it, but maybe your later movies will be worth the watch.
Edit: No, they weren't.
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